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5 days agoI think you’ve nailed it when you mentioned the bit about removing personality. I get this feeling a lot from folks who complain about florid language or even just about writing style in general. When you ask them to make it a better piece, it seems fairly common to get back something that’s without any of that messy human stuff like personality. and that’s fine, but that type of writing exists and not all writing needs to be like that.
Sadness.